Nowadays, larger distances are traveled by people to work and study on a daily basis. Some consider it to be a negative development, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, most of the people commuting to long distances for work and study increas significantly in all over the world. Some group of people said that it has some advers effect on personal life and society, While other against the statement. This essay will discuss both the argument and give my final opinion.
On the one hand, long distances traveling for work and study has some positive impact. The first and formost benifit is the better job opporcunity. For example, there are no industrial area avalable in their hometown so they prefer to work in other city or town. Qulity education is the second advantage for traveling long route. To illustrate, high education institutes and colleges are not exist in their city, As a result, they traveled to other city for the advance level of education. Last but not list, traveling to long distances creats revenue for the goverment becouse of traveler spend huge amount of money on traveling.
On the other hand, It has some negative consequnces of traveller. Firstly, it is damaged the social life of people, who prefer to travel long journey. To eloborate, due to traveling long kilometer, they do not have sufficent time to spend some quality time with their loved one. As a result, itlead problem in their relationship. Moreover, sometime it creats health problem in people such as mental stress, some illness and feel teard, becouse of spending most of time in bus and train.
To conclude, some people belive that traveling to other city for work and study has negative impect, whereas I belive that it has positive development for traveler such as quality education and better employement.
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Suggestion: existed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial life of people, who prefer to travel long journey. To eloborate, due to trave...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97833935018 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55416119196 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.422516813 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258552374614 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887095912078 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652945598895 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17663479188 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616399857958 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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