What is your view of the idea that every obstacle can be turned into an opportunity? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on the issue.
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We, unfortunately, confront inevitable problems everyday. If there were no “difficult” situations in our terminology, we wouldn’t be able to identify the problems and their solutions because every problem would be the same for our brain. The alteration of obstacles into opportunities, therefore, has become essential. The author of the quote has explicitly advocated and described the necessity of turning obstacles into an opportunity. From my standpoint, there are two ways to take advantage of a problem: being born with a related quality or developing required skills. During th...
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