We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Giving help, which is always generally considered to be beneficial, has led to this question that communities and nations rather need to be helped merely than helping everybody around the globe since it seems to be a difficult task. I completely disagree with the given statement, since helping all the people seems to be more advantageous in certain ways than communities and countries.
To initiate the reasons why it is important to help everyone globally. The first and foremost benefit is the strengthening of bonding with one another throughout the world. To explain, when people help any needy person or community across the borders, they are likely to make correlations with each other that may be beneficial for both of them in the future for giving and taking help because helping someone is always considered to be the best way for enhancing the relations. To cite an example, in India, the farmers, who are protesting against the new farm acts, are being helped not only by the local people but also the foreigners from different nations such as Canada, Australia, and the USA in terms of money, shelter, and food that have led to good relations with each other.
Another major benefit of helping someone cross the borders is to gain popularity among people throughout the world. To elaborate, if a single person or the group of people help any individual or the community in any country, they get the name and fame around the globe that can be a good lesson for new generation also in terms of giving aid because very rare people come at first and lend a helping hand to someone to get rid of trouble. For example, Khalsa aid, which is the helping organization worldwide, helped the people in Syria during a /the terrorist attack and gained popularity because of helping people for providing food, medical kits, and shelter.
In conclusion, I completely agree with this point of view because helping people all over the world seems to have more benefits because of increasing the bond as well as popularity among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eone to get rid of trouble. For example, Khalsa aid, which is the helping organiz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89337175793 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59544287102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521613832853 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4451271038 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.8 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276143496738 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128577583085 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459565140396 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187195637975 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572393783724 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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