You and a friend have both been accepted to the study abroad program in Cambridge, Canada.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Congratulate him for also being accepted.
- Ask him if he should like to be your roommate.
- Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together.
Hi Seju,
I am feeling very excited to write you this letter. Yesterday I received an email from the college about my acceptance job offer letter, I was on cloud nine reading that email. Then I contacted our consultant regarding your status and out of surprise you are also got an acceptance letter.
I am feeling proud of ourselves and want to congratulate you for getting admission to the college which you have dreamed of since our engineering. We were planning to study in a foreign country while we were in engineering, moreover, we did all our process together for the same course and in the same college. I am very enthusiastic to start my new life and career in the new country, as I read and got much information about job opportunities in Canada from my friend.
However, my friend told me about the lifestyle and expenses in Canada. He suggested me to find someone who could be your roommate, so I can share rents, utilities, and other non-negligible expenses. So I decided to ask you first as we know each other very well and also we are in the same course as well as in the same institute too.
In addition, I know that you are good at cooking, which would be fruitful for us. I am good at cleaning and preparing other activities to do in our weekdays out of our school schedule and weekend activities. I have contacted many employment agencies for our part-time job, as we are allowed to do work but with restricted hours of 20 only. There are many more activities we could possibly do together over there as we are sharing the same room, I might discuss all those works when we get there safely in this pandemic situations.
I hope you might be happier as me to travel in the new country for our bright future.
Yours lovingly,
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Seju, I am feeling very excited to write you t...
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Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...only. There are many more activities we could possibly do together over there as we are sharin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 29, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ations. I hope you might be happier as me to travel in the new country for our...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57053291536 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66741136341 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542319749216 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3657937055 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222049213348 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771390896882 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455539389518 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116460588221 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048065052166 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.