Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter:
Give details of your stay
What were the high & low points of the hotel
What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to tell my experience with your hotel and its services as I sojourn in OBIS hotel for a couple of days.
I went to Bangalore for holiday and stayed in your accomodation for seven days that was from 17th to 24th December. I chose the deluxe suite and also opted for your cab service because I preferred to explore the city by a car.
I would certainly appreciate the all time assistance provided by the staff because of whom, I could visit the historical museums and taste some delectable local cuisines. Moreover, the taxi driver was polite and an English speaker, who helped me confabulating with people. However, one thing I disliked the most was the food of your hotel as it was terrible in taste, and even one day it was contaminated.
Consequently, I would strongly suggest to improve the quality of your dishes and impose strict steps in the measurement of vegetables' validities. Overall, it was a terrific time spent in your premises except the food.
I hope you consider the feedback seriously.
Yours Faithfully,
Chirag Bhardwaj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ys that was from 17th to 24th December. I chose the deluxe suite and also opted f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ferred to explore the city by a car. I would certainly appreciate the all time...
^
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to confabulate' or 'confabulate'.
Suggestion: to confabulate; confabulate
...e and an English speaker, who helped me confabulating with people. However, one thing I disli...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest improving'.
Suggestion: suggest improving
...ated. Consequently, I would strongly suggest to improve the quality of your dishes and impose s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91397849462 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77906548948 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.973945595 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23148343384 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853775353172 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634574962775 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114632962515 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731236355663 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.