Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my feedback about your hotel.
Last month my family and I were on a vacation to Auckland and we choose to stay in your hotel for a week between 11-October to 17-October.
I really adored the bed in room #1203 and it is as good as new. I had witnessed breathtaking views from the balcony, which was the memorable part of my tour. I appreciate the hospitality services provided by the staff.
Having said that, there were few disappointments. Firstly, the heating system in the room was time-worn and had to consult the reception several times to have a working machine. On top of that, the menu in the cafeteria is limited and there weren’t any authentic cuisines.
I would like to suggest, improving the quality of heaters in rooms or else please having the backup machinery. Apart from this, it would be a good idea to include more and more dishes in an eatery. Nonetheless, I had a good stay.
Please do not hesitate to contact me at the above email.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hich was the memorable part of my tour. I appreciate the hospitality services pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, nonetheless, really, then, apart from, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82702702703 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83211262894 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8678855618 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6923076923 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206878873477 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636853755692 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852929247528 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836751001724 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108629876999 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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