Some people think news paper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media.
Do you agree or disagree?
The news paper is beginning vital source of news. This is a best place to find information about what is happening around the globe. News paper has been influenced favourably than other forms of media. I have to agree almost entirely with the given statement.
On the one hand, a variety of newspapers are most traditional mean of communicating news. For example, old people in rural areas might not have the ability of opportunity to get online, while many of us, simply prefer to read a news paper. Even though, most humans need to convenient condition to use typical media. Secondly, newspaper can be trusted as reliable sources of news becouse they employ professional editors and journalists. Finally, I strongly believe that, many people like to the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen.
On the other hand, nowadays, world outlook of humans' behaviour are developing day by Day. To address this issue, influence of other forms of media has been increased step by step. For instance, there has been an explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and You Tube where anyone can share their news and views. They can discuss thoughts also contribute with our own updates on social media. A final point is that, this source of news is less damaging to the environment.
In conclusions, newspapers the most salutary way to access the comprehensive information. I believe that, this trend will continue to publish persuative news rather than typical forms of social media.
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| 2020-12-25 | Elyor Nurimov | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
The news paper is beginning vital source of news. This...
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Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...beginning vital source of news. This is a best place to find information about wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Newspaper
...out what is happening around the globe. News paper has been influenced favourably than oth...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ile many of us, simply prefer to read a news paper. Even though, most humans need to conve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99607843137 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68498895817 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5640043368 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278119050903 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883336916493 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076457679573 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172886039067 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537521302216 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.