Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
Most people tell lies in different situations in their lives. From my vantage point, telling the truth plays a crucial role in every relationship. The significance of trust in the stability of any relationship is inevitable. I will elaborate on my viewpoint through three significant reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that friendship's longevity totally depends on the trust between friends, and it is so fragile. Thanks to this fact, when one side tells a lie, reliance and honesty immensely decrease; thus, the friendship is gone. My own experience provides an illuminating insight into this fact. I had a friend for about six years, and we were so right for each other. However, once she told me a lie about a matter, I became very disappointed, and I never trust her again.
The other reason deserving some words here is that when people say a lie, they adapt to say more and more lies to cover the first one, and gradually they get accustomed to saying lies. Furthermore, people who tell lies are nervous and worried about revealing the truth and breaking apart their relations. I would like to mention a result of research that was conducted last year at my university. Due to the outputs, most of the students who tell their friends lie have psychological problems, and as a consequence, they lose their friends readily.
In conclusion, contemplating all the paragraphs mentioned earlier, telling the truth is very fundamental in relationships since it keeps people from breaking the trust between them. Besides, telling the truth makes people happy and have a healthier friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friendships'' or 'friendship's'?
Suggestion: friendships'; friendship's
...exquisite point to be mentioned is that friendships longevity totally depends on the trust ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04044117647 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90471657001 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5711463834 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180393443787 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656467561079 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589815451852 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128396072451 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779574613589 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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