Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.
What are the problems related to this?
What are some possible solutions?
Elder peole require special care in order to live a decent life. But ithasbeen observed that due to lack of time young adults are not able to perform their duties significantly toward their elders which leads to certain problems. I have discussed numerous solutions to this problem in subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, in the contemporary world due to busy life schedule young people struggle to spare significant amount of time to take care of elder ones. Elder people require special attention or care to lead a decent level of life. Lack of care, love may lead to physical or mental crisis in old people. For example, old people with ceratin mental disabilities tend to harm themselves if they are not taken care properly. Due to lack of care, communication old people feel isolated due to which they lose the urge of living a longer life.
Governement can follow certain steps to eradicate this problem. Governement should fund welfare societies for elder people. It should initiate special pension schemes for old people so that they can earn their basic needs. Special health care organisations should be developed to examine the heath or well-being of old people. Free health check-up should be provided to them time to time. Special benefits should be provided to young people who are taking good care of their elders. By adopting all these steps this problem can be resolved to a certain level.
To conclude, old people are easily prone to mental illness or physical injuries, hence young adults or their children should understand their responsibility towards then and should take good care of them. Government's should also provide additional health benefits , pensions to old people. It is crucial for everyone to understand their resposibilities towards elder and should play a vital role to provide them better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 937.175257732 164% => OK
No of words: 302.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07947019868 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61907337822 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 290.88556701 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.491990124 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197391406537 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758931017149 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382646501872 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129475889069 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030570869611 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.