In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year
Now a days, In some countries there is a trend of working or travelling for a year before pursuing university studies among the students.this eassy will discuss merits and demerits of this trend
To begin with, there are several advantages of working or travelling. The first and foremost advantage of this trend is student gain lot of experience while travelling for they interact with new people and learn different cultures which boost their confidence and find solutions of every tackle in their life. Moreover while travelling or working, youth suffer from good or bad experiences in their life which will make their future. For instance, A survey conducted by chandigarh university youth who have prior experience or global exposure have greater chance of growing in their careers than those who lack one or both of them.obviously there are several benefits of working or travelling
On the other hand, young people who travelling or working between their studies lead to break the rythm of studies. Sometimes students lose their interest towards studies which is not magnificent for their future for every high salary jobs needs academic qualifications. Whlie working students find more interest in earning and unfortunately this hurt their career prospects. it is undeniable to say that a gap will effect the students career and lose the interest in studies
To conclude, there are merits and demerits to take a gap before pursuing university it will depend on us how we will take the opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7803978573 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8403003601 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.428571429 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237427111059 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103286145415 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875183351056 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136080605042 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933035537131 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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