It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is foolish. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
In contemporary society, whether to get married before completing school or getting employed or not has attracted the attention of the public and sparked a heated debate. From my perspective, I strongly advocate that it is rational to marry before graduating because of associated financial pressure and distractions coming from the marriage, and I will outline reasons in the following essay.
First and foremost, there are a myriad of reasons why marrying too early can be disadvantageous. And the most conspicuous one is that early marriage can distract couples from studies. To elaborate, not only do couples who marry too young need to strive to achieve academic excellence but also these couples need to handle domestic chores such as child-rearing, which can be time-consuming. Therefore, it is foolish to get married before finishing school.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect is that getting married before landing a job causes mounting financial stress. More specifically, it is irrefutable that newlyweds who cannot secure a stable income find themselves it hard to pay bills as a consequence of establishing a family. For example, a wedding and honeymoon can cost couples a leg and an arm to tie the knot. Hence, the disadvantage of marrying too young is increased financial burden.
However, as the adage said:" Every coin has two sides.", opponents asserted that marriage can provide couples with companionship. Nonetheless, I still held hold that couples tend to spend more time communicating and resolving conflicts than other groups.
To recapitulate, despite having the advantage of companionship, early marriage is irrational due to financial stress and distractions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53053435115 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24522886735 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6453863479 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207991270052 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876499182018 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142206563776 0.071462118173 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09632919458 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828104273408 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.