It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is foolish. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, getting married has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “is it advantageous or not?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that finishing school is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the school graduation standpoint, getting a job is bound up inextricably with foolish actions, which indicates they lead to both emotional marriage and finishing school problems. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between job opportunities and foolish consequences as well as an exponential increase in unsuccessful marriage. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of emotional marriage is correlated positively with not only finishing school but also getting married.
Within the realm of finishing school, without the slightest doubt, getting a job is attributed to foolish actions, in that it would come down to emotional marriage, finishing school problems, and job opportunities. A salient example of such attribution is foolish consequences, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take an unsuccessful marriage for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint finishing school problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of getting married.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes” all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that the advantages of getting married are of more significance.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...clude, as for myself, as the saying goes” all’s well that ends well,” after analy...
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... saying goes” all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.696 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23219801374 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7935893045 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321455525358 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119657952751 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073340508468 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181250783468 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397485729592 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
...clude, as for myself, as the saying goes” all’s well that ends well,” after analy...
^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
... saying goes” all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.696 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23219801374 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7935893045 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321455525358 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119657952751 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073340508468 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181250783468 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397485729592 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.