You are a football player, but you have to leave football team for a while, write a letter to your team mate and say
-why you have to leave,
-how much you love the football team,
- when you are coming back.
Dear vishal,
I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing this letter to inform you that I am not able to participate in our football team as my father is suffering from back problem and I have to go home back to look after him.
As you know we started playing football from 6th standard and from that time I think there is hardly any competition or game in which we did not participate. Whenever I am in football playground, I feel that is the best time of my life. Despite this I don’t have any option right now as my father met with an accident last month and now, he has a problem of back pain and in his neck. He has a workshop so I am going to help him in his work until he gets fit and fine. He has done a lot for me, whatever I am today is the only because of him so I cannot let him down during his injury.
I will be back and rejoin the team but this time my father needs me and for me my family comes first before anything else.
Hope to see you soon,
Manmohan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...else. Hope to see you soon, Manmohan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, i feel, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13145490217 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3012870711 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236914194989 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989339835223 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930421675939 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170495726319 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918046583062 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.04 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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