You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter,
tell him/her about the gift
tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend
explain why you chose this gift for your friend
Dear Chirag,
Guess what I have ordered for you! Yes, you are right, it's a SmartWatch. It has extremely great features. To give you an idea about this watch, it is a digital watch and you can set custom wallpapers to make it more attractive. It tracks heart rate and number of calories burned. Also, it is touchscreen and 100% waterproof.
There was this flash sale announced on an e-commerce website, I luckily got a great deal. I have added your home address for the delivery, by this weekend it will be delivered to you, so please be available. I knew you wanted such kind of watch for a long time. Also, I vividly remember, you are a fitness freak, thus, this watch will always be your companion while you workout. Needless to say, it comes with a countdown timer that can help you to monitor exercise with time. Moreover, the watch also tracks the distance while you go cycling. This will definitely help you keep a record of your overall distance covered till now.
I hope you will make the most out of this watch. Don't forget to share your feedback with me and say Hi to your brother and give my regards to your parents.
Best wishes,
Kunal Chavda
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- Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity How far do you share this viewpoint 78
- Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity How far do you share this viewpoint 78
- You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends Write a letter to this friend In your letter tell him her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ve ordered for you! Yes, you are right, its a SmartWatch. It has extremely great fe...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...u will make the most out of this watch. Dont forget to share your feedback with me a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54976303318 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36314742615 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1533839788 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275120017614 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883058975713 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665614650003 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196604752282 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338295824254 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.