Men and women are not equially suitable for the same tasks because of their inherent physical differences.
The prompt supports the idea that men and women are not suitable for many tasks because of their inherent differences. To most of the obvious reasons I would like to "strongly support" this statement. I am hereby, obliges to elaborate the reasons behind my support of this issue and there re many ways upon which it can be challenged; I am detailing below here.
To begin with - there are many jobs which require heavy lifting and huge physical effort. It is obvious from our daily practices that women (except some anomalies) are quite weaker with respect of physical strength compared to men - when considered for such kind of heavy bringing or lifting works. For example - a day laborer who is used to do tough works or a collie who lifts heavy bags of his customers can not be compensated with a woman who is not of same strength of his. She can not do those heavy tasks of lifting huge bags and bring those from here to there without a lot of hurdles. From here it can readily be seen that woman and man are not clearly made for the same task because of their inherent physical differences.
Coming to the second point - in daily lives it is evident that (mostly for developing countries or for the countries where women education has not championed with great enthusiasm) in most cases - the father of the families work the major or lion shares of works whereas, their wife are to be remained in their homes. In some families they are not allowed to their works outside homes or simply the dont jobs outsides the domestic chores. One of the prime reasons for their voluntary exception is their monthly period; a natural process of making woman's body suitable for child birth. This process enervates a lot of energy from women, leaving them vulnerable to various difficulties. Sometimes this includes a lot of bleeding or a lot of physical sacrifices. Consequently, these huge loads affect their daily lives as well as their works. Now in that case - from the point of view of an employer - he or she will definitely prefer a man to a woman for jobs that demand mental as well as physical pressure and endurance. So, yes - there are obvious reasons for the absence of women from different types of tasks compared to man.
Now, there are points which convicts - does the unsuitability of women in different jobs or tasks provide their incompatibility in job sectors comparing to their other halves? The answer is simple "NO". It is said in the prompt regarding the physical exceptions of the women, however, there are many tasks which do not require physical endurance. Women, providing necessary competence can surely avail those offers. In that respect women are getting similar results in tasks to the men.
Even after providing the necessary evidences and instances for supporting the agenda provided in the prompt, there are several situations and environments where women can not but have to the works suitable for men because of their need or other reasons. However, taking mass prospect into account; it is clearly evident that men and women are not mostly suitable for same tasks because of their obvious physical differences in physics.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...their works outside homes or simply the dont jobs outsides the domestic chores. One ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bvious physical differences in physics.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, kind of, as well as, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8595194085 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6058935112 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456561922366 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3299637614 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.304347826 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5217391304 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452561142156 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13695348466 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132617166975 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274140663437 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923983277183 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...their works outside homes or simply the dont jobs outsides the domestic chores. One ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bvious physical differences in physics.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, kind of, as well as, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8595194085 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6058935112 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456561922366 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3299637614 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.304347826 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5217391304 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452561142156 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13695348466 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132617166975 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274140663437 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923983277183 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.