You were recently impressed by a staff member at a store Write a letter describing your appreciation In your letter include what the situation was how you were helped what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Essay topics:

You were recently impressed by a staff member at a store.
Write a letter describing your appreciation. In your letter include:
what the situation was
how you were helped
what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this email to you to express my appreciation for the paramount significance for executed errands by one of your staff member. Their attention to my needs was improved my experience with your company. Allow me to elaborate on what happened.

After dropping me by your Ola-cab at 11:30 PM. I was realized I had left my briefcase in the taxi. As olla-taxi was still looks at the main gate, I notified it returned back by driver Mr. gandhi, towards my house and he gave me my briefcase back to me. Without my information to him, I was astonished and pleasantly surprised by his honest-intension for my well-being. And I wanted to let you aware that he is the member of your team who make a difference to your valued customers.

Needless to say, honesty of Mr. Gandhi is highly appreciated and because of his actions, I will surely book your cab again and will recommend it to all of my friends as well.

Your loyal customer,
Vishal Gajjar

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to you to expres...
^^^
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...l looks at the main gate, I notified it returned back by driver Mr. gandhi, towards my house ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riends as well. Your loyal customer, Vishal Gajjar
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81398257976 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8149584276 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196453344509 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812635267963 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572364805416 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124134581188 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662032205439 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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