You were recently impressed by a staff member at a store.
Write a letter describing your appreciation. In your letter include:
what the situation was
how you were helped
what you are going to do as a result of this good experience
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to compliment the services offered by your employees in big bazaar super market downtown. Further I would like to explain how the supervisor (Tony) and his staff helped me, along with a general recommendation.
I usually visit to your store to buy grocery every weekend; however, my last visit was highly pleasant and contented when a young man who is the supervisor of the store helped me. Actually, when I purchased all the items and was ready to check out on the cash counter, it came to my realization that I forgot my purse in the car. As you may know how arduous it is for a person in late 60's to go back to parking to pick my purse and back to counter as I was already feeling tired after the weekly shopping. Fortunately, the supervisor agreed to go and pick that purse for me from parking, meanwhile, another employee offered me water and a seat to wait. Finally, the supervisor came back with my purse and I cleared the cash counter.
This kind of helpful and humble behavior sincerely catches my heart that day and I would like to recommend this act of kindness in weekend newspaper under the column of city's unsung heroes.
I am completely humble and thankful for the kind cooperation by your employees.
Yours sincerely,
Thomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, however, may, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62608695652 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61041972014 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0163973113 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13811056013 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550096742275 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338248686658 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575263031096 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350966311867 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.