In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
one school of thought believe that in upcoming years individuals will prefer to visit their homeland for holiday but not travel internationally for vacation tour. I am certainly not agreeing with this opinion, because in order to have fun time it is more exciting to explore the world and enjoy cultural diversity. Howéver, some may suggest, it is an impactful approach to prevent deadly diseases spread, while avoiding travel to other countries.
Firstly, God has created natural resorts throughout the planet and tourists want to explore the natural confetti. They usually travel from one country to another. The culture of every continent varies from others, the visitors coming from abroad will find it more enthusiastic to notice diversified trinkets, monuments and historical places. For example, now a days turkey has become a tourist attraction because it is a mixed culture society of the Europe and Muslims. Turkey is focusing on tourism to make their country a holiday destination.
Secondly, If these attractions have not been identified and admired, it will ruin the phenomenon of making this world a global village. people will not have ample opportunities to excel in their careers, the migration will be stopped, and international relationships will not be developed. No one will have knowledge what's going on in neighbouring countries?
Apart from that few people reckon, it will cause spread of pandemics and devastating diseases. For example, the world was in surge of COVID-19 pandemic for two years and locked down has been announced for the entire world. The major etiology of prevalence of it was, the migration of people across the border. Millions of deaths have been reported during these days. it also caused shut down of local businesses, markets, schools, and offices.
To recapitulate, I suggest although, tour for vacation internationally can cause spread of diseases and create a detrimental health effects but it can be prevented by opting precautionary measures. Nonetheless, this world will become monotonous and static without exploring the natural beauty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89164592605 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9561793739 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196916539645 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591127761183 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596566081195 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100471715282 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569565384525 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.