TPO57: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
relaxing oneself and reducing the stress is very important. In fact, it is important to do what is necessary for a person to relax themseleves.some people might prefer that spending time alone is the best way to release stress and relax . however, I think the best way to relieve stress and relax is not by spending their time alone. The first reason is, it will clear ones mind more effectively. another reason is, protect the person for damaging oneself.
To begin with, spending time with friends, family or any person who is important to each other is very effective way to relax and reduce stress. Since, human is a social animal and he have some social needs like talking someone, meeting, playing and many more. so, spending time alone made sometimes person feels less and stressed. therefore, he need another person in their life to reduce their stress. For instance, when I started my college I feel very stressed about my studies. it was very difficult for me to prepare myself alone for the first semester examination. I tried to relax and calm myself alone, so i can studied for my examinations. however, all in vain. I did not do well in my exams. This would not had happened if I had discussed my problems with my other collegues and had told them about it. therefore, I believe that it is very important for a person to spend their time with someone so they can relax and reduce stress.
The second reason is, spending time with someone to relax help the person from damaging themseleves. some people can not survive alone, they are very much dependent on others even for small things. These people always need a partner, friend or someone to relax their mind. if they left alone they sometime cause damage themselves. For example, I have a friend in college she was very sensitive nature. Whenever, she had problems or in stress she discussed with her mother. when her mother died, she has no one talked to or loved her. she start getting depressed because stay all alone. when i started to talk her again and listened her problems she started feeling more confident and cope with her mother's death trauma. As a result, it is very benefiicial for person to spend their time with someone in order to relax and reduce stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relaxing
relaxing oneself and reducing the stress is very...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...the best way to release stress and relax . however, I think the best way to reliev...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... best way to release stress and relax . however, I think the best way to relieve stress...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t way to relieve stress and relax is not by spending their time alone. The first ...
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Suggestion: Another
... will clear ones mind more effectively. another reason is, protect the person for damag...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... Since, human is a social animal and he have some social needs like talking someone,...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: So
...omeone, meeting, playing and many more. so, spending time alone made sometimes per...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'made'.
Suggestion: sometimes made
... and many more. so, spending time alone made sometimes person feels less and stressed. therefo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...metimes person feels less and stressed. therefore, he need another person in their life t...
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Suggestion: It
... I feel very stressed about my studies. it was very difficult for me to prepare m...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it was very difficult for me to prepare myself alone for the first semester exam...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ried to relax and calm myself alone, so i can studied for my examinations. howeve...
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Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
...o relax and calm myself alone, so i can studied for my examinations. however, all in va...
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Suggestion: However
..., so i can studied for my examinations. however, all in vain. I did not do well in my e...
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Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...not do well in my exams. This would not had happened if I had discussed my problems...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...p the person from damaging themseleves. some people can not survive alone, they are ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... friend or someone to relax their mind. if they left alone they sometime cause dam...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... friend or someone to relax their mind. if they left alone they sometime cause dam...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... stress she discussed with her mother. when her mother died, she has no one talked ...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... she has no one talked to or loved her. she start getting depressed because stay al...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
... has no one talked to or loved her. she start getting depressed because stay all alon...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...tting depressed because stay all alone. when i started to talk her again and listene...
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Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... depressed because stay all alone. when i started to talk her again and listened ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68860759494 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40785178729 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.076501347 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1923076923 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268012211052 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861648489452 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998994988025 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219111622914 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712588731425 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.