Many people feel that Urban environments are more unhealthy than they have ever been. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?
There is an opinion asserting that today, cities and towns are less healthy compared to past. Although there are two leading causes behind this concern, factories, the government, and people can adopt several effective policies to remedy the situation.
One of the reasons that urban environments have become more unhealthy is the inevitable pollution caused by industrialization. Factories located in urban areas may discharge a considerable amount of harmful gases, wastes, and fluids into the environment. This could contaminate air, water, and soil leading to some ecologic disasters. To tackle this issue, industry sectors should consider all environmental impacts impeccably. In this respect, they should use modern filtration systems and check them regularly to ensure that dangerous particles' release is less than the allowed values. This is likely to be more efficient when it accompanies introducing more green spaces, which can absorb different pollutants and make the biosphere cleaner.
Another problem that brings about the noteworthy drive of environmental contamination is vehicles' emanations. With growing population density in urban areas, city dwellers use more cars to commute and regular their daily lives. This, in turn, creates a significant amount of toxic fumes and damaging pollutants. One possible solution to address this severe issue is that the government should provide people with cheap and comfortable public transportation. Regarding this purpose, they could subsidize the cost of bus and subway for people or give them some incentives to use bicycles in their daily travels. Consequently, it reduces the traffic congestion results in less let out of toxic products.
To conclude, the vast amount of industrial and transportation harmful emissions and products have made urban environments much more unhealthy than before. Employing modern filters in factories and using public vehicles instead of private ones are ways to deal with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, regarding, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68456375839 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93146495457 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0398711659 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282668914943 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797126838244 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050295410963 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162723267428 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445137621007 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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