Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree the people.. That problem have on the earth. It is a big problem.
My opinion the education that is very important humans. Some people not think that. I am not agree to them, becouse the education is big and this is doesn’t end. Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Some people do not study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family situation is rich and normal. They are people study the university. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education and sciense does not wait.
Today education coming the high level. At technology is very important for humans. The technology now is coming very high level. For example Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the name Tesla and fee years ago they are opened new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very important for humans. Now have new opened other section technology, medici, siciense and others.
Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I agree the people. That is shown we education very important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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...ing practical skills. I agree the people.. That problem have on the earth. It is a...
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...ills. I agree the people.. That problem have on the earth. It is a big problem. ...
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...ave on the earth. It is a big problem. My opinion the education that is very...
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Suggestion: agreed
...s. Some people not think that. I am not agree to them, becouse the education is big a...
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...arning practical skills. Some people do not study universinty. becouse the human...
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... Some people do not study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family ...
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...ot study universinty. becouse the humans are very poor. Some family situation is ...
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...university. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education ...
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...sity. Learn fact is not enough. We need more than more, becouse education and sc...
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... education and sciense does not wait. Today education coming the high lev...
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...very high level. For example Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the...
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...xample Elon Mask’s company opened first electrical car the name Tesla and fee ye...
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...e opened new Cybertruck car. It is first car living on the Mars. It is very impor...
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...ology, medici, siciense and others. Some people say that in all levels of ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52596694177 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434782608696 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4156626402 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.3333333333 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5416666667 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525931477562 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133918173179 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213228198439 0.0667982634062 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.419351782965 0.151304729494 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230056285724 0.056905535591 404% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.78 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.