Some people think air travel has more negative impacts than positive impacts on modern life. What do you think?
Although such topics will never yeild a consencual agreement a dilogue on Air transport can lead to thought provoking discussions. my view is that irrespective of numerouse argument that exist on either sides, air travelling plays a major role in this morden culture. through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the agreement.
Firstly there are few positive impacts by air transtport, nowadays many business people are opening their businesses in wide range so they feel light to travel in planes to visit and it also reduce time. countries like India, america and dubai are trading their goods in exchange of good and they are travelled in cargo services for example: food for medications ect.
There are some disadvantages to be considered, many people are not affordable to travell in flights and they are not able to explore moreover people feel discomfortable to travell in flight due to many issues or failiures. so government should make rule for air transports to reduce to ticket costs.
Finally, there are more positive impacts and trades going through the air transport consequently negative impacts should also be considered in this agreement where many airlines fail to look after their regulation and public feel discomfortable to travel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15420560748 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79430265851 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1725856179 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.875 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200262177739 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774395929304 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692537869741 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123486035662 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592274698031 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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