Some people think technology helps us save time but others believe it wastes our time

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Some people think technology helps us save time but others believe it wastes our time.

Submitted by sajeevan on Fri, 03/12/2021 - 04:03

Although such topics willnever yield a consensual agreement a dialogue on technology can lead to thought provoking discussions. my view is that iresspective of numerous argujement exist on either sides, technology advancement are waste of time by watching many videos it grabs our time and we public shoould know that time is preciouse but we should also cosider the advantage od using them. through the cousre of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering both the side of the arguement.

There are many disadvantage roles play in the socity, nowadays public as the development of technology every one has a cell phone which grabs our time and makes them lazy. as we are not aware that they are time killers and they affect our futures, in addition there are few social medias gives us memes and trolls which makes us to laugh and enjoy it but but we are not aware of time being killed.

Few advantages paly in this role, social medias as they kill our time consequently we should know that they gives us todays cureent news which is helpfull to gian knowledge and they helps us to gain new informations about the society. moreover young teenagers use technology in a good way for their educational puroses and they try to seek for the future.

To conclude with, hence i have provided both the sides of view which should be considered partialy, they are potential evidence that there are many disadvantages by being lazy and wasting time by watching social medias whihc kills times, furthermore there are few advantages to be considered of people seach new ideas though it and they seek their futuer by gainning knowlege and information thorugh technology.

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Average: 8.6 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2673992674 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86771782059 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3103818144 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163226960252 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577836010477 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442409434934 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100255347363 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381854832508 0.0609392437508 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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