The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures reported describe the structure of a single and a double dormitories, located in an university in Australia.
Overall, the dimensions and structures of the two bedrooms are similiar, whereas there is a slight variation in regard of the facilities provided.
In both the maps, bathroom and the kitchen are located on the left, on the top and on the bottom, respectively. Likewise, a study desk and a bed can be always found on the right hand corner of the room. Also the dimensions are extremely similiar, with a common lenght of 6 metres and a width of 2.5 metres for the smaller space and 4 for the wider one.
Moving to differences, it clearly stands out that a table with some chairs is missing in the individual room, while it is present in the double. Moreover, in the latter has been added another single-size bed and a second study desk, placed in the bottom of the figure. Unsurprisingly, the price for the two option is slightly different, with a cost of 350$ for week for the double and $200 for the single one. Hence, the difference in price for just one person is of 25$ every 7 days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'dormitory'?
Suggestion: dormitory
... the structure of a single and a double dormitories, located in an university in Australia....
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...le and a double dormitories, located in an university in Australia. Overall, th...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d on the right hand corner of the room. Also the dimensions are extremely similiar, ...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...n is slightly different, with a cost of 350$ for week for the double and 00 for the ...
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Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25'.
Suggestion: $25
...ence in price for just one person is of 25$ every 7 days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57711442786 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71552479258 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7286508496 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211017809574 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075482252091 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633759963572 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108491912116 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564333751698 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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