Tourism has increased over the last 50 years that is having a negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment however that is good for the economy discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
The tourist industry has significantly grown during the last five decades. Even though people have different views about the effects of this trend on host countries' environment and economy, in my opinion, having some minor environmental problems, tourism can bring undeniable economic advantages for visited places.
Admittedly, there are some disadvantages for destination countries' inhabitants to be visited by many people today. Firstly, it could deteriorate the quality of these area's air. Many public and private transports used by tourists would release a vast amount of damaging pollutants and toxic gases into the air. A recent study illustrates that Istanbul's quality air index, as a tourist attraction place, has become less compared to 50 years ago. Secondly, vast heaps of garbage and unprocessed waste, produced by holidaymakers and left into natural habitats, could be dangerous for wildlife. Take plastic as an example; this non-degradable material would put creatures' lives in jeopardy if it were eaten by them.
Nevertheless, despite the drawbacks above, I believe that the growing sightseers' population has considerable merits for the local economy. One crucial upside would be that it enhances the employ ability rate. In other words, the more visitors, the more job opportunities in accommodation and transportation units could be created. This would be more highlighted in those countries such as Turkey, which a large group of people is working in tourism-related professions. Another positive aspect is that using the taxes earned from the flourishing tourist industry; the local governments would be able to build or renovate some infrastructures like roads and railways. This, in turn, could provide countries with economic growth through much more convenient transportation.
In conclusion, I believe that the financial benefits tourist attraction regions can gain through tourism progression outweigh any unfavorable environmental impacts that would be inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74410774411 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13486276488 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670033670034 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9010305502 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134142395417 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384613973156 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452135058006 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871463770811 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472608086976 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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