In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The explosive growth of online media and e-books has noticeably changed the way people read. There is the possibility to read everything free of charge instead of purchasing hard copies, which will have revolutionized the printing industry since there would not be any customers.
SOME ARGUE THAT paper books and printed newspapers are still valuable. This is mainly because they are accustomed to reading them on paper. They think that they can easily focus on materials and follow the lines so that nothing can distract them. Using gadgets including laptops and mobile phones may divert the attention of those who are not able to concentrate. Although there are some new programs and devices like kindle that ARE INTENDED PRIMARILY FOR READING rather than gaming, some people still resist the new technology.
Having said that, I still believe THAT in the future, digital books and online news services render printed books and newspapers obsolete. One of the most compelling reason is that the cost of downloading reading materials COMPARED to purchasing the printed ones seems reasonable. This originally stems from the fact that “PAPER” IS becoming unaffordable due to its high environmental value, which may INHIBIT “MANY” knowledge seekers FROM acquiring knowledge and information. Online materials are FREELY available EVERYWHERE (or at lower prices), minimizing the cost of publishing.
Not only WOULD THIS REDUCE the COSTS of paper printing, but also the distribution and shipping costs will be eliminated. The internet has introduced a new concept in delivery process where there is no need to carry heavy books and newspapers to the destination.
The variety of services that these cutting-edge technologies offer is also incomparable to its previous ones. THESE services FACILITATE the process of reading AND MAKE IT MORE AFFORDABLE. For instance, every simple book can be stored in A laptop or mobile phone, WHICH WOULD TAKE UP VERY LITTLE space in comparison with CONVENTIONAL books, WHICH require massive bookshelves to accommodate. The lower price of maintaining countless resources ENABLES the user TO have access to utterly different source of information.
TO CONCLUDE, more and more people nowadays are reading online. It is inevitable that printed books and newspaper are going to become an alternative to the previous resources because new technologies are cost-effective and provide a lot of services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44473684211 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87920594432 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581578947368 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.659980598 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.894736842 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23023921237 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652246214971 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050629005929 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112199644117 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407071001608 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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