Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Many individuals these days decide to work for themselves instead of being employed by others. This essay will discuss the reasons for this along with the draw backs.
First and foremost reason for starting own business is that it provides potential increase in an entrepreneurs' income. Entrepreneur can create multiple income streams for their business, and they can earn more than the traditional jobs. It is because when an individual works hard on their basis, can take advantage of all the benefits instead of sharing with other employers. As well as person can save and invest in new streams that are scaleable and sustainable which can be helpful for paying expenses. Another thing is flexibility of schedule. Can work when and where they want, and without any restriction of employer.
Apparently, running a business is not without drawbacks. One of the disadvantages is failure of business. A person invests lifetime saving to starts a new business that is one of the biggest risk. Without having backup plans if business does not go well then have to face substantial financial loss. Another demerit is stress that it can make diverse effect on an individual. For owning your business you need full commitment from initial days to till end of the project which is impossible task. Moreover, sometimes it leads to working for longer hours which effects person's personal life.
In conclusion, although venturing out your own business gives profit as well as it leads to financial loss and fatique.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'entrepreneurs'' or 'entrepreneur's'?
Suggestion: entrepreneurs'; entrepreneur's
...at it provides potential increase in an entrepreneurs income. Entrepreneur can create multipl...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on of employer. Apparently, running a business is not without drawbacks. One o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, another thing, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10887096774 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68665514998 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7945307307 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1875 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132194867566 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421912769939 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672981150572 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091506252782 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959143142996 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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