People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
In the recent decades, there has been a trend to drink more sugar-rich or sweet drinks compared with malted or other beverages. Although the reasons for this might be a combination of marketing and changes in people's lifestyle, however I believe that with the right steps, people may be able to overcome this problem.
To begin with, there are a multitude of causes related to why people often drink sugar-rich drinks. First of all, drinking these sweetened juices often allows the person to feel refreshed and energetic during the busy hours of the day. Secondly, even though these drinks might not mention it, there is some caffeine added, which stimulates people to think faster and proactively. Finally, these drinks are often marketed to a certain group of people as offering an alternative to health damaging alcoholic drinks. However, even though most people might not realize it, these sugary drinks are often more harmful than many other beverages out there. For example, the American temperance association recently found out that people drinking these carbohydrate rich drinks may suffer from high blood pressure and gastronomical problems.
There are various effective ways to reduce people from consuming these sugary liquids. The most basic step is to avoid watching any sort of advertisements or media which actively promote these drinks. The next step is to keep an alternative to these sugar-coated materials, especially those juices which are high in minerals and vitamins. Finally, by adopting a healthy lifestyle and regularly keeping track of the dietary intake, a person may consciously avoid such derogatory drinks. For instance, in Japan, people have stopped taking artificial sugars and have switched their diet to fruits and vegetables.
All in all, the effects of having such high levels of sugar in our diet is leading to many diseases and to avoid these, everyone must proactively change their food intake and lifestyle. It is essential both for the health of individuals and the society, that these menace that might cause extreme cases of health problems in the future is taken care of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this carbohydrate' or 'these carbohydrates'?
Suggestion: this carbohydrate; these carbohydrates
...recently found out that people drinking these carbohydrate rich drinks may suffer from high blood ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this everyone' or ''?
Suggestion: this everyone;
...s leading to many diseases and to avoid these everyone must proactively change their food inta...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...e their food intake and lifestyle It is essential both for the health of individuals and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, sort of, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1081871345 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5044828315 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 342.0 20.2975951904 1685% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1747.0 106.682146367 1638% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 342.0 20.7667163134 1647% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 119.0 7.06120827912 1685% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283883629092 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283883629092 0.084324248473 337% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165618802464 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902302457565 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 173.6 13.0946893788 1326% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -275.65 50.2224549098 -549% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 136.7 11.3001002004 1210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.84 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.75 8.58950901804 288% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 138.8 10.1190380762 1372% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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