Some people think the free activities in person's life should be planned while other disagree. To what extend do you agree or disagree and give your opinion.
According to some people perspective is leisure activities in individual life should pre organized while other don't understand this point. As both groups have their personal reasons to this argument. In first point of view think unplanned activity brings more enjoyment and fun, while other consider it as time saver. I also in favor of second opinion.
Organization of free time to perform specific fun activities is thinking of some people, because it saves our free moments which are quite rare in contemporary life. As people are busy and find little pieces of time out of routine. If we planned days or extra time than it demolish the chance to indecisiveness about what to do. And an other factor is arrangement of thing which utilized is also arrange in advance. Which we can spend on productive fun activities. For instance, if we already have plans to visit some place on weekend or in holidays than it will quite helpful in pre booking or arrangements, because these places where we plan to visit other people also went there. And its very difficult to manage on that same day and also expensive.
The extra time out of work should not planned by other group of individuals, the reason is that when we organize our free time it kills the joy and excitement. Because when we tour a site out of any expectation our level of enjoyment and suspense increase. They think that, particular feel at that specific moment which encourage you to explore that thing is important. For instances, many preplanned things collapse on that day and destroy all time.
In conclusion, organizing leisure time into particular activity is important for some people and, don't for other. Some persons think it by not managing before give unexpected happiness while other in favor of it consider it as its time saving technique. In my opinion planning is necessary especially when hang out with group of people because each and everyone have their own secudules and preference for certain activities. If someone going on its own then choice on that moment is possible, but for bunch of people its not effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80112044818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55712995459 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518207282913 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 357.0 20.2975951904 1759% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1714.0 106.682146367 1607% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 357.0 20.7667163134 1719% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 89.0 7.06120827912 1260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261284606474 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261284606474 0.084324248473 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166759948782 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534687171293 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 179.7 13.0946893788 1372% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -290.88 50.2224549098 -579% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 142.5 11.3001002004 1261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.31 8.58950901804 283% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 144.8 10.1190380762 1431% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.