"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this century, medical professionals are striving to deliver the best possible care to the patients. One school of thought believes that from the health budget a significant amount of money should be spent on how to take precautions and awareness about health concerns. I completely agree with this moot point as it is a preferred mode of saving society from deadly diseases that can create detrimental health effects. it will also prove impactful approach in terms of increasing patients admissions into the hospitals.
Let's look at the first view, the ever-expanding urban population has increased pressure on the healthcare professionals. Now a days, it has been said that precautions and health education can solve this issue. In order to mitigate the prevalence of lethal virus and bacteria, people should follow the principle to take precautions in advance. Since the spread of pandemics depend upon society's hygienic conditions. By following simple techniques nations can prevent themselves from detrimental diseases.
Secondly, if the number of admittance increased in the hospitals, the more diseases would be likely to spread. By all means, nosocomial infections (hospital acquired infections) more likely to prevail. Furthermore, it has had a pressure on the workforce in the healthcare system. For instance, many people has been victimized by lethal Corona virus and it pushed the entire world into the intermittent locked down condition for two years. Large proportion of the budget has been consumed in treating the victim. it would not ever happen, if we have had followed the precautions and maintained the hygienic conditions.
On the contrary, other areas such as, education, law and justice, technology also need close attention. education plays a crucial role in the country's development, judiciary service carries equal importance to prevent crimes, Communication and it services have been required to strengthen the international relations.
At last, the Government should focus on their weaknesses according to their needs and invest on those in which they are lagging behind. As this is the matter of consideration, how to spend the hard-earned money to keep up peace and harmony?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ikely to spread By all means nosocomial infections hospital acquired infections more likel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33720930233 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90052190339 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59011627907 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 344.0 20.2975951904 1695% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1836.0 106.682146367 1721% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 344.0 20.7667163134 1656% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 7.06120827912 1445% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193129644173 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193129644173 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920370436667 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520883156103 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 175.7 13.0946893788 1342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -286.14 50.2224549098 -570% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 138.6 11.3001002004 1227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.15 8.58950901804 293% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 139.6 10.1190380762 1380% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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