The chart below shows the profit made by an SMG entertainment from different formats in three European countries.
The diagrams illustrate the profit, which was made by SMG entertainment in the form of different categories in three European countries.
Overall, profit divided into five categories, such as CDs bought in shops or on the online platform. While it downloaded through the internet commenced in 2007. And people in the past preferred cassette and vinyl singles and LPs in Germany, France and Italy.
First of all, in1997 the record-breaking profit made by the Cds mouth in shops, it was highest in both years profit, it almost over the 40 million euros in Germany. In that year France did profit near to quarter, and Italy was at 20 million euros. In the year 2007, shop profit alleviated in Germany at that time, it was similar to France in 1977. Another, two countries profit was at near to each other, it respectively 15 and 14 million euros.
Secondly, internet downloads were not commenced in 1997, it started in 2007. At that time company made a profit of fewer than 10 million euros in all three countries.
Germany and France were the same probably 5 million euros. And Italy was 2 million. Cassettes had the same ratio in the two countries, it augmented 2 million euros in Italy in 1997. Vinyl singles and LPs were made 3 million profit in Germany and another country had done equally profit 5 million euros each.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ght in shops or on the online platform. While it downloaded through the internet comm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78695652174 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55865409445 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3968866935 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171671269703 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635629232671 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887161520087 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125546136387 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108528826398 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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