More and More people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes, and
other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
In this day and age, people show their propensity for having their own different kinds of renowned brands such as cars, clothes and other items. There are some reasons to be attributable to this tendency. I am of the opinion that this is a negative trend.
On the one hand, There is a wide range of compelling reasons to explain why the increasing numbers of people have a desire to own well-known brands. Firstly, because it is likely to help them widen social networking sites with other people which having same level or social status. From that, it will facilitate easily for their business. For instance, Ly Nha Ky, she is not only one of the most famous stars in Viet Nam but also a successful businesswoman all over the world thanks to having their own luxurious brands of clothes. She also have the chance to communicate and collaborate with the world’s leading stars.
Secondly, they might receive respect from other people in the life through their wealth. Since when they own a high-end any type of item, to some extent it also expresses themselves to be rich. Therefore, others around them will have a distinct look from them and admire them instead of seeing them with a dirty look.
On the other hand, this trend will leave some tremendous effects on society and individual. Firstly, when people do not have enough money to own a famous item, they have to borrow a large amount of money from others such as friends or neighborhoods. Furthermore, they also do not know the way to take into consideration everything to be appropriate with their budgeting strategy. Thus, this makes them go into debt and become a debtor. Besides, as they kept on pursuing the enthusiasm of having reputable brands, they will spend more time on building those items until they will feel they successful. As a result, they will gradually become isolated from their significant people like friends or family members. This is one of the negative things lead to weakening their relationship bonds.
In conclusion, Although I have to admit that there are lots of reasonable reasons to understand that why people long to own famous brands, I think that it is not a positive trend for people to pursue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n luxurious brands of clothes. She also have the chance to communicate and collabora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81530343008 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57678159702 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525065963061 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5577840773 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0526315789 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52631578947 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29509985032 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949187665125 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742018001642 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18812270159 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961947434632 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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