The causes of obesity

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The causes of obesity

Human is the feature that constantly tends to chase for beauty and perfection. Therefore, the defects of appearance seem to be their unhealthy obsession and should be removed as soon as possible. Unfortunately, obesity which a number of people suffer the present day is one of them. However, before the effective solutions for this issue are discovered, its reasons should be absolutely covered.
Several explanations that are worth mentioning about this problem. First of all, obesity has its origin in overeating junk food being extremely popular among the youngsters. Junk food has diversity about color, shape, species, price, …, that is appropriate for all types of customers. Therefore, it is rapidly considered as a best-selling product and displayed widely in supermarkets or even large commercial centers. However, the customers are not aware of the risks for health these foods may cause. When junk food is consumed very often, the excess fat, simple carbohydrates and processed sugar found in this can contribute to many serious diseases including obesity. In general, it can be said that the growth of junk food has a strong influence on the increase in obesity day by day.
Secondly, physical inactivity also leads to obesity condition in human, especially the juvenile. The overload of studying and work may reduce the free time that they need to do exercises regularly every day. Even when they manage to do that, the ones who are mentally tired and heavily stressed also do not lose weight in short term. In addition, laziness in physical activities exerts a negative impact on the health and weight of a person. Unluckily, this situation is usually witnessed in the major of youngsters. They desire to eat appetizing foods, play video games all day, sprawl idly on the bed, and then have a sound sleep rather than immerse themselves in outdoor sports activities. That means teenagers just continually absorb nutrients from foods and drinks without playing any sports to consume excess fat. Consequently, it is the fat amount that becomes one of the main reasons for obesity.
The third reason may be shocking but scientists claimed that obesity can also derive from using medications. They are drugs used to treat mental illness, high blood pressure or heart rate, rheumatoid arthritis, and diabetes. On contrary to popular belief that these diseases cause obesity, it is medications for these that result in weight gain conditions for patients. Medicine-related weight gain can have many explanations. Some medicines might stimulate appetite which certainly needs to be demanded. Some might exert an adverse impact on the body’s metabolism which plays a crucial role in processing the excess fat. Others might cause people to retain water, which makes them weigh more even if they do not put extra fat. The side effects of medications are not inevitable, thus, people should pay attention to their health and do exercises frequently to keep the body balanced.
In conclusion, the increase in people who suffer from obesity is understandable because of both objective and subjective reasons. Gaining weight is not difficult while losing weight is a true challenge that not many people can struggle to overcome. The best health care method to prevent obesity is comprehending its reasons, finding the solutions for them as well as intensifying sports activities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in short, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2847.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23345588235 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78674954889 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564338235294 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 891.0 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5452661964 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.9 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149705247445 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339281375947 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523255661908 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804150110825 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342506927453 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 86.8835125448 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6.0
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