You rent a seven-bedroom house, which you share with 3 friends. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.
Write a letter to the agency. In the letter:
- explain your situation
- describe the problems with the house
- say what would you like to happen
Dear Mr. Emadi
I am writing in the regard of the four-bedroom house that we rented last week.
First of all, I need to thank you for all the efforts you put in order to find a place for four and married guys, which is not easy. However, in the past seven days, my friends and I have been experiencing and number of problems as follows:
Firstly, due to the fact that all of full-time employees, we need to take showers on by one in the evening when we get home. But, unfortunately, they hold on the floor of the bathroom has been rapidly getting blocked up we something unknown. So, water cannot dray away. Secondly, at this time of the year which is boiling hot, having an air conditioning is vital. Although at first day it seemed to work properly, after two days, it is stopped working read out any notable reason. As a result, it is so difficult to spend time at home.
Therefore, I would like you to ask the landlord either to undertake the task to repair the mentioned items, or take responsibility of the cost of them. Since we have just moved in, in it is totally unfair if we fix them on our own.
I am looking forward to hearing from you very soon,
Yours sincerely,
Jack Robinson
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-05-09 | mahyarr | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-20 | krishyparms | 78 | view |
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents Others however believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- A local college is having an international day You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures Write a letter to the college head In your letter tell him her about topics you are going to talk about explain why they would be of in
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers while others believe that students attitude is important Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources whilst other people believe that sport is a vital part of education Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41964285714 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47356882451 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674107142857 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5788732456 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157318237923 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482879833474 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471872754374 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934531816933 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519943775596 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.