Many regions in the world rely on tourism for the revenue it generates. However, some people complain about the problems that come with tourism.
What are some of these problems and how can they be solved?
The natural environment provides humanity with various scenic landscapes beneficial for many countries’ economic development through tourism. In my opinion, it is reasonable to argue that travelers may cause their destinations a significant number of issues including negative effects on the ecosystem. However, I believe that if governments take effective steps to deal with those detrimental influences, they are bound to advance in their tourism in the long run.
Together with the increasing popularity of tourism, there is a certain adverse bearing on both the nature and traditional values of attractions. Firstly, tourism services tend to depend on tourists to earn benefits, so they may easily concess some destructive actions of travelers. Therefore, many visitors lacking self-consciousness have sabotaged memorial statues and treasures at historic sites. In addition, as an area becomes more recreational and financial to meet the demands of tourists, its local businesses are likely to be more pragmatic. Indeed, many tourists visiting Asian nations such as Vietnam, Thailand, or Cambodia have criticized the overly high price of goods, food, and souvenirs.
Nevertheless, if the governments take an initiative in addressing the aforementioned problems, the tourists may still play a key role in the national economy. The proposal is meant to strictly punish destructive actions, even those of the visitors. It is how the leaders can instinctively state their priorities for the nations’ environment, historic sites, and cultural wonders. Moreover, the natives need to be aware of integrity in trading, especially with the tourists. In fact, the worst impression to a visitor is the greediness and dishonesty of the sellers. This will hurt the image of the areas themselves and degenerate the value of their moral tradition.
In summary, it cannot be denied that tourism may do the countries some disservice, especially on their environment and culture. However, I strongly believe that the proper treatment and reliable costs of goods can improve current problems and enhance the countries’ economy in the long run. Otherwise, they may end up with the decadence of their own tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, food, and souvenirs. Nevertheless, if the governments take an initiative in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in addition, in fact, in summary, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56083086053 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11880588303 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623145400593 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5816271419 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204575710649 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566003673776 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501854575071 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120247063303 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460318825949 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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