Some people think that in the modern world the countries are independent of each other, while others think that they have become more dependent. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that in the modern era, the nations are independent, others believe that they depend upon other countries. In my opinion, I consider that it is crucial to be independent but in some kind of situations, the countries become reliant on others.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the nations become independent. The major reason is that the number of people increasing in workplaces, therefore the community attain knowledgeable persons. As a result, they will help to surge the economy of the nation. Another reason for the countries become independent is that technological advancement therefore the nations have adequate resources.
On the other hand, there are myriad reasons why the countries have become more dependent. Firstly, many countries have lack of resources and they do not have enough funds so they do not develop their nation by themself. Consequently, they rely on other nations. For instance, most of the African countries rely on The UK. Secondly, At the time of national calamity, the nations become dependent on others.
In my opinion, I believe that the countries, which have sufficient budgets and ample resources, become independent but in some kind of circumstance, the countries have become reliant on others.
In recapitulation, where people are varying in their opinion, I think that the nations have become more independent when they have sufficient fund and plenty of resources and the countries have become more dependent on others because of lack of adequate resources and in some circumstances.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-05-18 | Viru Patel | 56 | view |
- The graph below shows the cinema attendance of people on different days of the week in 2003 2005 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 69
- The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic result while others believe that it is important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that in the modern world the countries are independent of each other while others think that they have become more dependent Discuss both the view and give your opinion 56
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that in the modern era, the nations are independent, others believe that they d...
^^
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...odern era, the nations are independent, others believe that they depend upon oth...
^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that technological advancement therefore the nations have adequate resources. ...
^^
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the nations become dependent on others. In my opinion, I believe that the countr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31075697211 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95024157223 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470119521912 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5160139151 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377168757879 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13636542701 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995080240975 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23852564339 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948789273041 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.