A letter:
You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence,in your letter:
introduce yourself
inform him/her of the situation
request that the problem be fixed
I am John Smith, currently studying Masters degree in IT, living at campus accommodation Flat 3, Block A, Glens College. I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint against more or less no internet connection which is very crucial for my study.
As you know, internet is vital for everybody particularly for students. We all flatmates are affected with poor quality of internet service. Most of time it remains disconnected and is very slow and irritating once gets connected. Moreover, Modem installed in our flat, as I guess seems very old and makes noise all the time.
Therefore, most accessible form of communication like email,blogging, distant calling etc. heavily relies on good internet service which is vital for our daily communication with friends, families and lecturers. Thus, my humble request to you is replace old modem with new branded one and inspect if there are other causes for this problem.
Your prompt resolution for this problem is highly appreciated.
Thanks for your kind consideration.
Sincerely
John Smith
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my humble request to you is replace old modem
my humble request to you is to replace old modem
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 169 200
No. of Characters: 844 1000
No. of Different Words: 124 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.994 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.753 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.06 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.678 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4