Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come

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Topic: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept this invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank him for the invitation.
- Explain why you cannot come.
- Ask him about other time to visit.

Topic: Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing her your absence. In your letter:
- State why you could not go
- Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner
- Suggest another time to meet

Dear Charles,

I am writing to express how sorry I am for missing your birthday party. Actually, I had to look after my mom in hospital last night due to her asthma attack. Please let me explain what happened.

My mom has got a severe asthma for many years, but her symptoms has recently been under control by specialty medications. However, yesterday afternoon after we had lunch at a local restaurant nearby my house, she started to have a sudden shortness of breath then her asthma symptoms got worsened. I immediately took her to emergency room and stayed with her all night. Luckily, she’s got recovered and discharged today morning. It was so urgent that I completely forgot to let you know about this incident.

I heard your party was memorable, and I really wish I could have made it. I would like to take you out for dinner instead. Please get back to me with a suggested date.

Hope to see you soon,

Your friend,

Ryan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 414, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...ily, she’s got recovered and discharged today morning. It was so urgent that I completely for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, look, really, so, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83962264151 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47489941123 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674528301887 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4479052109 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365296520878 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114268174299 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116951801601 0.0603063233224 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161009940838 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132214561433 0.0580467560999 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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