Nowadays many people have to work longer time and they feel more stressful than before.
What are the reasons?
What can employers do to make their life easier?
Nowadays competitiveness is a very common word use by companies to attract new talent to their payrolls. They encouraged their employees to be better pushing them to the edge with challenging projects or with longer hours at the office. Many professionals have dreamt of getting a good job with big benefits and an important amount of free time to rest. Nevertheless, these things aren't usually coming alone, working more than the arranged time is very common these days.
While people are more often working overtime, companies are getting more demanding with them. One of the most common causes of stress is working more time than your contract has stipulated. People are not resting enough time, and in some cases, this gets worse because of the long distances they have to travel to get to work. in a city like Santiago where public transport is quite good, many factories and industrial sites are in the skirts of the metropolitan region. Although the factories pay good money, traveling is not amusing to many people.
As far as I'm concerned, employers could take several measures to make their employees live better, such as adopting remote work modality in positions in which the person is not required to be in the facility, moreover, companies must encourage their people to get their free time once or twice a year and not let them passing a year without any time off.
To summarize, I think that work should be a means to an end, not the other way around. Moreover, having a job should not be a cause of stress and other issues related to physical and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: aren't
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Suggestion: In
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lated to physical and mental health. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, nevertheless, so, while, i think, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84981684982 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55172919028 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0908141073 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2605404917 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874586486884 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457339478375 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141494334338 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524317256932 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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