The drawbacks of traditional energy sources mean that they are not a long-term solution to meeting the ever-increasing power needs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain the reasoning for the position you take.
Power and energy have always been an issue in the country Ghana. It is the most taxed sector released by the Ghana Statistics Board. Over the years there many energy techs have been developed and that are really helping pushing industries. Currently in Ghana, the main source of energy production is hydroelectric and nuclear energy. Even though these sources have been of great help, it is imperative that cheaper and make safer power techs are generated.
Over the years, we have used hydroelectricity, coal, natural gas has our main sources of energy. In Ghana there are regulatory Bodies that check the operations of institutions that produce energy through these sources. But the ripple effects on nature keep rising. Hydroelectricity heavy depends on waters and rivers. Damming of rivers and other water bodies, affects the fish hence the turbines installed, and chemicals used render that dam dangerous for fish life. Burning of coal and drilling of oil causes air pollution. Drilling of oil and its transportation sometimes causes oil spillage and effects poisons wildlife found in the portion of the sea. Recently, TV3- Ghana telecasted an incident along the seashores of Accra-Ghana where Dolphins were pictured at the seashore struggling to breath because of the continuous pollution of the water bodies. Nuclear energy is reliable and inexpensive in the short because there is no thing as air pollution or oil spillage. But in the long run this source will create a lot of radioactive waste which will in turn cause issues for the workers and plants.
Beyond the enormous health hazards and current sources of energy impose huge economic costs on the consumers. In Ghana cost of electricity rises every quarter and yet the power is not stable. As a firm you end up spending more on power but the returns on it is not always guaranteed. If these alternative power sources are developed, this would help firms who are now coming into business. Due to the highly nepotistic era, we find ourselves companies who are trying to invent such techs find it hard to access loans from the banks because of fear of collapsing the already existing power model. Yearly health hazards and its related conditions cause the government Billions of Cedi’s.
Some energy theorists and company executives argue that the push for new sources of energy might affect the already existing companies that have these traditional sources as their main business model. They all accept that their business model is not favorable to the environment. Yet they fail to accept that if they do not change their business model there will no business since the ripple has collapsed it. Newly developed techs like solar energy and nuclear energy already exist in homes and some hospital even use it. If the limited resources aligned in that direction are producing great outputs, more intensive investments from the central government of Ghana will make these less expensive and this would reduce the economic burden on the consumers.
Those who argue that alternative sources of power production are too expensive and might collapse already existing power companies are very short-sighted. In fact, the current energy sources have lots of indirect costs in its effects on our health and environment at large. The engineers responsible for this have barely taped into the potential of these alternative energy sources. The engineers are getting comfortable at where they are, this zeal can be ignited if the government is committed to taping in these sources. With the limited at our disposal and an ever increasing population to consider , we should not delay in diverting resources to explore alternative sources of energy.
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- The drawbacks of traditional energy sources mean that they are not a long term solution to meeting the ever increasing power needs Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain the reasoning 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3105.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 604.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14072847682 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64929649941 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 985.5 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7751824213 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.161290323 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4838709677 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.12903225806 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142763585829 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357294714909 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302154004339 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800367619521 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199430760574 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.