Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession why is the case and what can be done to avoid it

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Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession.
why is the case and what can be done to avoid it?

Farming is a piller of a nation's economy but in these days youth does not like this field. The main causes of these are fascination of white collar jobs,lack of rewards in agriculture,does not want to take risks but a proper education,recoganiation and subsidies can make a difference.Firstly this essay will discuss some causes and then also about some soluations.

As we know ,adults are more passionate towards office jobs as compare to other trades because it provide them security for future and also get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot want to take risks such as not good earning,labour costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working during the weekdays in the comparison of a farmer who does more hard work.

To promote this trend, there should be lot to do such as impose a good agriculture education system which build interest in this field.Government and universities should provide some rewards and subsidies to those who wants to start new farming business.there should be a proper remuneration of their hard work.

Schools, universities and Government should take this problem seriously and give some offers to lure them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
Farming is a piller of a nations economy but in these days youth does no...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...iller of a nations economy but in these days youth does not like this field. The mai...
^^^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lack
...ese are fascination of white collar jobs,lack of rewards in agriculture,does not want...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , does
...llar jobs,lack of rewards in agriculture,does not want to take risks but a proper edu...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , recoganiation
...ant to take risks but a proper education,recoganiation and subsidies can make a difference.Fir...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...ion and subsidies can make a difference.Firstly this essay will discuss some causes and...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lso about some soluations. As we know ,adults are more passionate towards offic...
^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ionate towards office jobs as compare to other trades because it provide them sec...
^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... as compare to other trades because it provide them security for future and also get r...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...curity for future and also get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...curity for future and also get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Young
...lso get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot want to take risks such ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , labour
...t to take risks such as not good earning,labour costs,weather conditions. For example,A...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , weather
...ks such as not good earning,labour costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , An
...ur costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working d...
^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
...r costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working duri...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'guys'?
Suggestion: guys
...s,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working during t...
^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Government
...stem which build interest in this field.Government and universities should provide some re...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20725388601 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30483851897 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9335832517 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863140509469 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392498377591 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326871781602 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529366087466 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305646302631 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
Farming is a piller of a nations economy but in these days youth does no...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...iller of a nations economy but in these days youth does not like this field. The mai...
^^^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lack
...ese are fascination of white collar jobs,lack of rewards in agriculture,does not want...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , does
...llar jobs,lack of rewards in agriculture,does not want to take risks but a proper edu...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , recoganiation
...ant to take risks but a proper education,recoganiation and subsidies can make a difference.Fir...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...ion and subsidies can make a difference.Firstly this essay will discuss some causes and...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lso about some soluations. As we know ,adults are more passionate towards offic...
^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ionate towards office jobs as compare to other trades because it provide them sec...
^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... as compare to other trades because it provide them security for future and also get r...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...curity for future and also get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...curity for future and also get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot w...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Young
...lso get rewards. which farming does not.Young people doesnot want to take risks such ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , labour
...t to take risks such as not good earning,labour costs,weather conditions. For example,A...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , weather
...ks such as not good earning,labour costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , An
...ur costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working d...
^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
...r costs,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working duri...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'guys'?
Suggestion: guys
...s,weather conditions. For example,An IT guy get paid more just for working during t...
^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Government
...stem which build interest in this field.Government and universities should provide some re...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20725388601 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30483851897 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9335832517 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863140509469 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392498377591 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326871781602 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529366087466 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305646302631 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.