Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends? 1. joining a sports team 2. participating in community activities 3. Traveling
Throughout history, friends have played a crucial role in people’s lives and society. In this regard, people have always tried to make new friends using different ways. Some people possess the conviction that joining a sports team is the best way to find a friend, whereas others hold alternative perspective and allege that participating in a community activities or travelling are better ways to make new friends. I take the view that participating in sports team activity is a more sensible way to make new friends. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, in sports team, team members face different challenges and try to solve these issues cooperatively. There is a widely held view that the more people collaborate each other to solve problems, the more they will tend to establish rapport with each other. To put it simply, when people encounter different and complex difficulties, they should spend more time coming up with solutions, so they will have more time to get to know each other. My experience is a case in point. Approximately five years ago, I was in a soccer team in our college. When I joined the team, I was a new member who don’t know anyone. As time elapsed, the team take part in more and more competition and we confronted various challenges. Therefore, we spend time with each other solving many challenges. This situation, provided us with the golden opportunity to get familiar with each other and everyone’s personality traits. Therefore, we were able to make new friends, and after many years, we are still friends. Had I not joined the mentioned sports team, I would not have been able to forge a relationship with others.
The second noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that team members have the same objective, which means they will try their best to help each other so that they could achieve their aims. There is no denying the fact that when people help each other in harsh situations, it will affect their relationship. In other words, the more people help each other, the more it is possible for them to became friends. In the research conducted in my country in 2020, the factors that facilitated making new friends were analyzed. The results revealed that one of the most important factors was to assist others in hardships. People who experienced the same difficulties simultaneously and aided each other were more likely to establish a deep relationship after that. The reason for this was that when their teammate endeavored to help them, they were capable of relieving their stresses, and this sense caused them confide in their peers.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that joining sports team is a more prudent course of action to make new friends. Not only does it lead people to spending more time each other to get to the root of the problems and forge a good relationship with each other, but also encourage them to help each other in difficulties, both of which give rise to making new friends. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are several reasons and examples, which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that students join sports team to be able to get to know new people and make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...llege that participating in a community activities or travelling are better ways to make n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, whereas, as to, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2764.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 567.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87477954145 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.721652984 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 842.4 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0088332389 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.37037037 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240681325548 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785517745192 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103214822337 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183771563232 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119034220002 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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