There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than international music heard everywhere nowadays?
There is indeed a huge different kind of music all over the world these days namely rap, punk rock, or jazz. This type of art has represented humans convey messages and connect everyone closer. In my opinion, music plays a significant part in individual lives and I argue that conventional music is more crucial than the worldwide one and the main reasons will be analyzed before the conclusion is drawn.
In the first, It is clear to see that music has influenced people's spirit in their life or work. In the high-pressure world, the citizens may feel stressed and exhausted from many sides so music as a medicine for the soul, help people avoid the tension and refresh their mind after a hard-working day. Moreover, not only to relax, attractive melody and inspirative lyrics also refill energy for employees or learners so that it could motivate them to achieve more meaningful milestones in their life. For instance, through the report of Australian Institution, it is said that the students relaxing by listening to music after school time are more likely to have brilliant thinking and get a better position in the future than those who choose to play video games or watch TV.
In the second play, from my point of view, classical music of a region has more value than the modern music that we hear every day. Above all, traditional music describes clearly the local culture which can impress the tourists to get more knowledge about the dwellers and their life in this area. Furthermore, the national identity has also contributed to promoting around the world by a folk song to develop the relationship between other countries. An example of this is "Cai Luong" one type of traditional music in western Vietnam, which not only represents the agricultural lifestyle but also becomes more popular in the youth because of the true story and catchy beat.
To summarize all my mention, music is an essential part and accompanies all of us throughout our life. And by virtue of these reasons, I believe that traditional music is an individual piece of national art. Last but not least the government and residents should allocate more fund to this aspect so that we can generalize to the next generation more popular
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89973614776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65417520658 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585751978892 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2672195865 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347492803875 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119519215837 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698946243697 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217530145026 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468155894313 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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