information technology has developed dramatically and has had great influence on our social life. What effects do you think information technology have on our social life
The development of the information technology has great impact on our social llife. More modern, smarter, more convenient.Firstly, shopping is easier . In the past, buyer had to go to the store or market when they needed to shop. But nowadays , you just need to sit at home and order. No matter what products from clothes, foods, funitures to car or house.... Can be purchase online with the variety of shopping apps. Moreover, moving is also more convenient. With famous transportation apps such as Uber, Grab. Wherever you go, it is not important. Just a few clicks, you will book a car or taxi. Secondly, IT offers great benefit for learning and developing knowledge and skills. Online leanring apps not only help you to be proactive about time and costs but also break the barries of the distance and range. You can learn anytime, anywhere. Especially, when the word is dealing with the Covid 19 pandemic, online learning is the prioritization method of studying for mostly schools at this time. The invention of health check up and medical declaration apps has been contributing to help people be safer and more secure in social distancing and pandemic preventation.Thirdly, IT is a communication tool that helps people get closer. Nowadays, communication is very easy and faster with just a smartphone or laptop, you can chat or connect with families, relatives or friends eventhough they are thousands of kilometer apart. You can also exchange work with partners and customers across the country. Not only saves time, close the gap but also solves important issues simply and quickly. But besides the positives that IT brings there are also negative effects on our social life.For example: Internet addiction, depression,.... Information technology makes you lazier, makes you difficulty sleeping, destroys your biological clock. Not only sleep, your health is also seriously affected to health, as well as mental health.In short, the development of information technology has brought people completely new changes. But it also brings people many unnecessary consequences. If we use it properly, selectively and with preventive measures, information technology is wonderful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...convenient. Firstly, shopping is easier . In the past, buyer had to go to the sto...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t when they needed to shop. But nowadays , you just need to sit at home and order....
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Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun click seems to be countable; consider using: 'few clicks'.
Suggestion: few clicks
...ver you go, it is not important. Just a few click, you will book a car or taxi Secondly...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a few click, you will book a car or taxi Secondly, IT offers great benefit for le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01509433962 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75562799939 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7224199185 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9473684211 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137532009896 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448027753184 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104582226932 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112003236485 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115373384423 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.