Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods while other argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that, the manufacturing industries and retailers should use less amount of packaging, whereas a junk group of people argue that, consumers should ignore such products. So prior, commenting, I will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, why people believe that the producers should not be used packaging materials in the large amount. Firstly, beside profit making industries, they have some onus towards environment. What I mean to say by this is that, it is noticed that in millennium days, manufacturing firms are used a lot of packaging material to attract people, which are usually made from non-biodegradable material, and ended up with land feeling and dumped in the sea. It would increase the proportion of land and water pollution. For instance, in India, a quarter of pollution caused by packaging materials.
On the other hand, some people say that, it is a responsibility of buyers to avoid such goods. To begin with, people can influence the manufacturing organizations and super marketers. By this I mean, if people started to avoid the product, on which excessive packaging done, then manufacturing are encouraged themselves to decrease the amount of decorative materials on their products, also enable themselves to use bio-digridebal material. For instance, in the USA, in the 2015, people avoid buying products, which have extremely packaging, after that would the half of the producer reduce the amount of packaging on their products.
In conclusion, I reiterate that, it is a responsibility of both, manufacturers and consumer, as it will help to reduce the amount of land and water pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21886792453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10690958163 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6733487407 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314265346359 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10641875255 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478931717011 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181660917196 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407959191771 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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