Over sugar consumption is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both the views and give your opinion?
It is true that excessive consumption of sugar detrimental for our health .While some argue that it is government`s obligation to tackle this problem, I side with those who think that individuals themselves should be responsible for this .
On the one hand, government should find some measures to the problems that concern society. To put it simply, government should educate its citizens about adverse effect of sugar on human body in order to reduce sugar intake. If the government creates special plan to teach children from childhood about danger of sugar, It will be better. Besides, the authority can put restriction on some products. For example produced in factories dried fruits, peanut butter, bread, soy milk contain sugar, but these products are considered tasty and can be consumed without sugar. Also, sugar hidden in places one least suspect, in spaghetti sauce, ketchup, sport drinks, bologna.
On the flip side, it is one`s duty to maintain its health. In order to take control of sugar that is consumed by people, they should reduce sugar intake by finding alternatives. For instance, instead of candy or donuts people can choose banana or apple, they also contain sugar but their glycemic index are lower, therefore fruits and vegetables can be perfect alternative for sugary products. Moreover, people by checking the package of the product before purchasing are able to reduce over-consumption of sugar. Added-sugar has 55 aliases like rice syrup, corn syrup, caramel, diatase and so on. Hence, just by looking on food labels and reading the list of ingredients everyone can identify the sugar content.
In conclusion, despite the idea about governments obligation when it comes to sugar consumption, I believe that everyone should be responsible for their own health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2787456446 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78770230006 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3497363695 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.108208771323 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851681554294 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198943292394 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158485325495 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.