some people believe that people have the right to university education, and govermnent should make it free no matter what their financial background. to what extent do agree or disagree ?
Education is considered as birthright, the importance of higher study was always debatable which has now become more controversial topic. Some community confess that authority should unpaid the learning process for everyone without scrutinizing healthy and poor lifestyle, while opponents does not stand with this statement and possess different approach. As per my point of view , the primary notion seems more rational to stand with upcoming arguments with an analytical conclusion.
On the one hand, there are myriad of reasons which will explain further debates but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that getting a tertiary degree , is not a cup of tea. uncountable learner could not accomplish their dreams just because the expensive of university. If the quality education is made approachable for all students than, it will direct favour country's overall establishment in future. Another striking benefits of this regard is that there will be no discrimination between middle class and affluent societies as, average earning workers hardly continue their children education after completing higher secondary and some of them take study loan as well to provide quality education. So if ministry will not charge tuition fee than it would appreciate as prestigious initiative of ever.Hence, many are in favour of this trend.
On the other hand, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the one of the most alarming one is that nation economy can suffer as well as, tutors salary, changing in infrastructure, and others expenses who will accountable this may, ministry could not bear all these budgets.If all the institutions will lead free education than, there can be developed a serious problem. Not all but few of undergraduates will take study as game they may not give proper concentration on curriculum due to free education, they will persistently fail and enroll in classes. As a result, study material will be wasted and teachers time alseo . These are the some negative effects of having free versity learning.
To encapsulate, after a careful analysing one can reach to consequence, that draw attention is that administration should have some universities where those scholar are admission who are unable to pay course fee along with for those who did perform excellent in school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36675461741 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8842513295 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612137203166 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.152255413 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.461538462 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907188076439 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334311145554 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333566552738 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548248682382 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112737592276 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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