Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy , with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this ?
Nowadays, it is not uncommon to see that, everyone understands the significance of keeping one's house and working space clean and well arranged. In my opinion I completely agree with the notion of cleanliness and the essay will explain in detail about it.
Firstly, this results in a healthier living situation around the world. People who regularly clean their workplace or home tend to be more relaxed and healthy compared to others. This is because of the clear air circulating thought out the area due to lack of accumulation of dirt and dust that, otherwise causes air contamination. For instance, a research project revealed that the probability of developing COPD and asthma is directly proportional to the concentration of pollutants in the air. Thus, breathing in fresh air decreases the chance of respiratory diseases.
Secondly, a neat and well organized place helps to save a lot of time. Most people spend a lot of their valuable time in the morning, in search of common things like car keys or wallets, that they end up being late for work. Besides, a well organized workplace not only looks good, but also provide satisfaction. For example, a health survey conducted showed that, people at work tend to be tensed or stressed out to an extent that, it is hindering with their performances and many employees have reported that untidy working environment as the main factor.
In conclusion, the common practice of keeping our home and office neat and clean has been agreed by everyone. And I favour this behaviour because it is a great method for living a peaceful, relaxing and disease free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9778597786 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8053746703 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0931344636 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125081938009 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420994480238 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291509508725 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704053303933 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00864714255782 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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