Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
Some people believe that it is essential to keep our home and office neat and tidy with everything kept in their right place. I fully agree with this view. This practice not only eliminates unwanted stress from our lives but also brings joy and peace.
Firstly, keeping our surroundings decluttered is a pre-requisite to having easy access to various things we use on a regular basis. By assigning a proper place for different items we can find them without wasting any time unnecessarily. For instance, I have a specific place for keeping my passport and other personal ID cards and I make it a point to put them back each time I use them. This habit comes to my rescue when I have to find these cards urgently for filling up a form or submitting an ID proof. Thus, it saves me from the hassle of searching for my ID cards in every part of my home and trying to recollect where I might have put them after using them the last time.
Secondly, a clean and well-maintained home and workplace bring peace and harmony into our lives. It is a well-known fact that cluttered homes and workplaces irritate people and sap us of our energy. In addition, I have often observed that the act of tidying up and organizing things itself gives us a sense of satisfaction and happiness.
In conclusion, my opinion is that we all should strive to create a clean and organised environment around us. It will not only make our lives easier but also give us more joy and happiness by eliminating stress from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56296296296 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64113289904 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5612758717 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14214544797 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578600829842 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061930604361 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963075859802 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691503774824 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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