The number of companies that sell their products all over the world is increasing. Does this development have more advantage or disadvantage?
Nowadays, too much companies are sell product every part of world. It is very good purpose and bring lot of advantage to company and also country. For company sell all over world means to make more money. Company become rich meaning country also become rich. Also company get more famous when they sold product everywhere. For example, Iphone is amerca company but people in small town in India buy Iphone and Iphone is very famous. More people in India, Pakisthan and other part buy Iphone it getting more and more famous. This Iphone selling everywhere make more job for people. Same like Amajon. Amajon is very famous in India and too many persons working for big company like amajon. So big company like Iphone and Amajon make amerca very famous. Also too many advertisement make persons buy Iphone or work for amajon.
In total, it is very advantage to sell product all over the world and all companies are trying to sell everywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, too much companies are sell product every part o...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... rich meaning country also become rich. Also company get more famous when they sold ...
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Line 1, column 755, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...one and Amajon make amerca very famous. Also too many advertisement make persons buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77914110429 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13384075665 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478527607362 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5540100245 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259361405365 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118310945578 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118011562933 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298952950604 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965252318178 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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